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by Winterhawk99
Mon Dec 28, 2020 2:51 pm
Forum: Reviews
Topic: The City of Arabel
Replies: 39
Views: 6379

Re: The City of Arabel

The rest of the story Lauriella is awaken with a start. Her lieutenant is standing over her. Captain! Captain! We need you now. She gets out of bed quickly putting on her uniform and steps out on Deck of her 400-ton staysail schooner, The Moonflower II. The ship itself is a three-mast super schooner...
by Winterhawk99
Mon Dec 28, 2020 2:46 pm
Forum: Reviews
Topic: The City of Arabel
Replies: 39
Views: 6379

Re: The City of Arabel

Nigella parks her 35ft sloop along the trench of the Wyvernwater lake as her client had paid extra for the side trip. Besides she knows the other captain well enough to know what she’s doing. Captain Lauriella Sithiir, one hell of a beauty of a sun elf walks up in uniform cavalry boots clicking on t...
by Winterhawk99
Mon Dec 28, 2020 2:41 pm
Forum: Reviews
Topic: The City of Arabel
Replies: 39
Views: 6379

Re: The City of Arabel

After a long day Lauriella goes up to her room and pens a letter not to the council or anyone near. She pens a letter to someone far away. Dearest Alluin, My Heart, Love and Soul, I have missed writing these past months. It has been a long half year. I have lost my ship due to shares. A captain cann...
by Winterhawk99
Mon Dec 28, 2020 2:37 pm
Forum: Reviews
Topic: The City of Arabel
Replies: 39
Views: 6379

Re: The City of Arabel

Lauriella eats a breakfast platter on the patio of Lem's. It's near sunset and a time she normally wakes up to start her night. Being a worshipper of the elven moon goddess she prefers to be active at night rather than the day. Looking out over the great lake Wyvernwater she sighs. She waits for a s...
by Winterhawk99
Mon Dec 28, 2020 2:36 pm
Forum: Reviews
Topic: The City of Arabel
Replies: 39
Views: 6379

Re: The City of Arabel

Lauriella slides the remains of her breakfast aside while sitting on the patio of Lem's inn. She opens her Journal up and writes. I am not sure what happen last reflection but something did. at dusk I had set up the tables, snacks and alcohol. No one was there. I prayed several hours reflecting upon...
by Winterhawk99
Sat Dec 19, 2020 1:08 am
Forum: Children of Hell Desperation Book I and II
Topic: New working title (A field of Lilies)
Replies: 18
Views: 3915

Re: New working title (A field of Lilies)

The novel is now at the copywrite office. it may take a few months to get it back. It gives me time to set up the site for selling the book and do some other things. :) Thank you everyone for being patient. I'm going to take a break from writing for awhile then start the outline for the last childre...
by Winterhawk99
Tue Dec 15, 2020 1:21 am
Forum: Children of Hell Desperation Book I and II
Topic: New working title (A field of Lilies)
Replies: 18
Views: 3915

Re: New working title (A field of Lilies)

I filed for copywrite today. so the work is now finalized and now I have to wait. for the news to come back. :)
by Winterhawk99
Wed Dec 09, 2020 1:52 am
Forum: Children of Hell Desperation Book I and II
Topic: New working title (A field of Lilies)
Replies: 18
Views: 3915

Re: New working title (A field of Lilies)

I'm on edit/proofread # 6. one the first 10 chapters and intermission I have 0 errors and 2 rephrasing of sentences. One on chapter 8 the other on the intermission. It looks like at least for now it will be my last proofread and I can put in for the copywrite after i finish this edit. :) once i get ...
by Winterhawk99
Sun Nov 22, 2020 7:30 pm
Forum: Children of Hell Desperation Book I and II
Topic: New working title (A field of Lilies)
Replies: 18
Views: 3915

Re: New working title (A field of Lilies)

Im on my third editing read of the book. I'm still see small things here and there. So I'm refining the work. When I can no longer find any mistakes or things to describe better then I'll get it copywritten. the work is really coming along and the two proofreader/reviewers I have word from love the ...
by Winterhawk99
Thu Nov 12, 2020 9:26 am
Forum: Children of Hell Desperation Book I and II
Topic: New working title (A field of Lilies)
Replies: 18
Views: 3915

Re: New working title (A field of Lilies)

I have completed the rough draft of A field of Lilies. I'll be looking for proofreaders soon so they may tell me how to refine it. After editing I will put it up for download. Soon enough you will be able to read it. :)