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The second Book

Postby Winterhawk99 » Fri Nov 24, 2017 10:36 pm

I'm slowly working on the second book. I'll give updates from time to time on it. Right now I have only one chapter finished and am working on the overall plot outline.
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Re: The second Book

Postby Winterhawk99 » Sun Jan 21, 2018 7:57 pm

Ok, So I tore up the first chapter and re-wrote it. the last section is sort of long so I'll split it into the second chapter. I do have some parameters to work with.

I want to both slow the book down from the first one in some aspects and speed it up at the same time.

I want to slow it down in the aspect of the characters themselves to show more depth to them. Especially Randyl, Kioshi and Miwa. So less action packed more mental stuff in this book. At least that's the goal.

I want to speed the time frame up by alot. The first book takes place over a year and a half. The second will end about 30-40 days after the first ends.

One of the challenges I am facing at the moment is that I boxed myself into a corner with Fade becoming the avatar of Tiamat. That leaves the greater nations with limited options. So I'm considering what to do with Ryuu's faction that wants to go deeper into the hells. I'm also considering what Glasya is going to do about the situation.
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